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hmm...

A bit lame. but you have potential. keep working at it. I like your humor, or rather I just like that "mash" just blows off everyone, and that's pretty funny. well, any way, good luck with more animations. you'll get better eventually, it just takes time.

OMG

You Used Buck-O-Nine! You Rock, just for that. Great movie though!

I Smell Something Good...

This is pretty big of me to say, but cinematically, this is the greatest flash animation to date. I mean, I thought Chluaids Brackenwood series was the best, but this beats it hands down. I think the reason why is because it's visually appealing. You used that cell-shaded look, and it just worked. Your artwork is also very simplistic, but at the same time very detailed, straight down to lines being slightly curved, to give the overall look more character.

In terms of the story, I liked it a lot. I mean, the whole Dragonball Z thing was totally working, so good choice on the style of fighting. I like the idea of a super pope, it's quite humorous. The voices could have been recorded better. I'm not sure what kind of mics you used. But I really can't say anything bad about this movie. Your template was really nice, and I thought the little buttons at the bottom of your preloader were funny. So, um, yeah... Amazing Job. I can't wait for tomorrow when your on the front page and this movie ends up being number on the charts for a long time, cause I know it will be.

(Oh, and Grip Work? What did you do, pick up you computer? And Gaffer? What did you plug your computer in and turn it on? You're very silly, but than again, most people don't know what they are, so it probably makes you look more important. hahaha. Later)

mhm...

Best use of the blur effect yet. yeah... this will make front page, without a doubt. I do however wish there were voices, cause it would definately make the movie funnier. I also very much enjoyed your credits, I haven't seen that done in a while. Um, lets see what else... The script was well, pretty terrible. I can't lie about that, your obviously lacking in that department. But you are a great animator, and you could probably, in the near future make some epic movies. sorry for the mixed review. I do that sometimes. anyway, great job, look forward to seeing more wrok from you. lata

rebaz responds:

yeah, my other movie also LAcks Voice-acting !!! >_<
but i know what you mean...it issent a mixed review...i knew i would get a review like this..i'm alos waiting for that Blam Review! =D,

LATTA

Take this review more seriously than others.

I liked it. I voted 3, for little reasons. Well, first, you spelt fight wrong (Figth) so just change that. I mean, that'll take 2 seconds. Um lets see.
Your photoshop work was decent. I see you used some popular effects, like that drawing one. That's one of my favorites. The sound quality was pretty poor, and I'm aware you said that, so just change it. I don't really like the song you used, cause its a bit over used, but theres really no point changing it now cause your movie goes a long with it, so I'll give yah props on syncrinization. It does need sound effects though. I wasn't really feeling it, I was kinda entertained. You could seriously make this movie badass with some sound effects, or at the least, some foley. I'm not saying you have to add voices or nothing, you know, no ADR or nothing, but a few screams and grunts here and there would kick this movie up a notch. You obviously used premade sprites, with what looked like a couple personlized, like the front view, but I may be mistaken. but I won't bust your chops on that cause my sprites for ALTTA are borrowed. good use of the blur. and I enjoyed the actual fight. it was very well timed and choreographed. you have really great potential to make something amazing, and I'm glad that you chose the sprite genre, god knows we need more good animators to make us all look good. unlike those clock movies which most people hate because most of them suck. Yeah, so, um. That's about it. Great Job, and I definately look foward to seeing more movies from you. Lata!

OMFG!!!!!!

Holy Jesus Licking Christ. That Was ridiculous. At first, I was like, "I've seen kids do this before", but then your friend in the green came in, and I was dieing on the floor. this was fucking hilarious. You guys rock. do another song!!!! For the love of God!!!!!!

Word Of Advice

You Need To Change Things in your movie if you actually want it to be good. Take this too the heart, cause it can only help.

1. You need fix up your black boxes. you can obviously see little slips of the background.

2. The audio is crap. The music sucked, and there were no sound effects. so just add them.

3. Continuity!!!!!!! Dude, knuckles, or "fuckles" was from advance, meanwhile sonic was from the 3rd game. not to mention, all the really horrific sprites, like the half robotnik robot thing. and tails went from the 3rd game, and then when you made him super, he was from advance. (You should have just used the super tails from sonic 3). Also robotnik at the end was from sonic 1.

4. I liked the text boxes, they were designed very nicely, and the text themselves was sweet. but the words written inside, were utter garbage. write a better script, like one that is funny.

5. There was no plot. knuckles just fucked everything, tails blew up? I'm confused.

6. Your style of animation is weak. it doesn't flow, it's very choppy.

Overall I'm gonna state that, while sprites are fun, and easy, because all you have to do is just cut and paste, and blah blah blah, don't make a sprite movie, unless it looks good, because it makes the rest of us sprite animators look bad, and then everytime someone sees a sprite movie they automatically blam it. and I don't like being blammed just because my movies are a certain genre.

Now, go back into your movie, fix it up, and update it. I'll check back in like a month. so you better make this shit look good, and be damn funny,!

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Well this is what I get for 2 days of work. But for one thing, your series is not that good animation neither is it very funny. It's still better then my shit anyway.

Good

There are some serious audio issues in your movie. fix them. Your animation is amazing. so its a real shame when something that looks good, sounds like shit.

Good stuff Bro

Was this going 30 fps, cause it sure felt like it. anyway. good stuff.

woot up in the his-house

If it was 2 years "lata", wouldn't it still, technically be halloween? (love them monkeys!)

Yoshi-1up responds:

Na man :D cuz it wasn't hollaween to begin with! LOL LAME

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